Sounds interesting! You're getting some good feedback on it too! Great idea to post it!
I like the feedback you received - things that you can easily identify and make work! Great job!
Good luck! Crossing all my fingers and toes for you :)Look forward to your next update....
Hey Steena! I see you've followed me "on the pile". I like what you posted there. I'm going to look it over and see if I can put in my two cents.Thanks, Wendy!
Wow! Those guys are serious query critters! Too cool. :)
Lisa ~ The slushpile is an excellent resource to improve your query letter. Writing these letters, for me, is agonizing and the worst part of the writing process.The premise of your story sounds very interesting!
Hey, thanks DL!
Wow, what a great idea! Hadn't seen that query site before.
Thanks Jennifer—and welcome to my little corner of the world.
Nice query! Your story sounds amazing.